and they're off...

[leoniedelt]

903 words today, just now. Will probably write more before bed.

My first S&S fic, omgyay!

Did physical descriptions sort of a combination of Lumley&McCallum and Warner&Harker. Tried not to voerstate Steel's height as McCallum was only 5.8, but Warner is 6'2... Harker is blonde but nowhere as thin as Lumley, that kind of thing.

Tried to keep the dialogue as real as I know they do, serious, fast, hard dialogue...

So, who wants to be my beta? lol

And my poem about madness and fire, adapted from the one posted in my last thread? Here it is:

As i sat atop my bed

I met a man inside my head

He talked of fire and pain and death

And how they'd come and take my breath

He wasn't really in my head

I wasn't really by my bed

But there he was again today

Oh how I wish he'd go away

I hope to use that in different parts of the story. As for a title, i've yet to come up with one that's suitably spooky.

Comments

[purple_bug.livejournal.com]

Can't remember, haven't seen it since last summer... I remember them skipping/playing games and singing a rhyme, could've been that one.

[leoniedelt.livejournal.com]

I've heard 'One foot up one foot down, this is the way to Londontown' a few times, but nothing about a man on a stairs... i am only a few mins into part 1 though.